A couple of weeks ago I made an attempt at a Planescape inspired subclass for the Warlock.
Since then I have been able to incorporate feedback offered by the community as well as play test with the player who asked me to make this character possible for her. For a little context our campaign has become a sort of planar power rangers adventure. We have a Evocation Wizard, a Horizon Walker Ranger, and now the LoP Warlock. We started the campaign at 5th level and have since progressed to 9th. The initial goal of the subclass was to provide another front-liner option other than the Hexblade that is more defensive where the Hexblade is offensive.
To that end we have streamlined the central feature, Serenity's Shadow, to offer the same AC bonus while swapping out the ability to make creatures vulnerable to damage for a few castings of Hellish Rebuke.
I am still concerned with the actual wording of certain features for consistency with published materials as well as the overall balance of the Subclass at higher levels.
The Lady of Pain Patron
You have quietly made a Pact with the Lady of Pain and her Cage. As a shadow of Her Serenity, you have been charged with maintaining balance among the planes while preserving the Lady’s privacy. As part of this pact, you have the following restrictions & benefits:
- You must never divulge the nature of your pact, even under pain of death.
- You must protect the Dabu and the city of Sigil, and never bring either harm.
- Alcohol and other intoxicants have no diminishing effect on the pain you feel. Conversely, your tolerance for pain has increased by twice that of most mortal creatures.
- You can understand the strange visual language of the Dabu, but cannot communicate using it.
Expanded Spell List
- 1st: Shield, inflict wounds
- 2nd: Cloud of daggers, silence
- 3rd: Blink, life transference
- 4th: Stoneskin, death ward
- 5th: Planar binding, geas
Starting at 1st level, you can as an action cast an ominous shadow obscuring your form from enemies in a 10-foot radius centered on you for 8 hours that provides you with several benefits:
You gain a bonus to your AC equal to half your Charisma modifier, rounded down (minimum of +1) while your shadow is active.
As a reaction to being struck by a creature within your aura, you can cast a version of the hellish rebuke spell. The level of the spell is equivalent to the number of Serenity’s Shadow’s charges that you spend. This spell cannot exceed 5th level (6d10), and you must have the capability of casting the spell at the appropriate corresponding level. The damage for this reaction is considered magical slashing damage, and uses your spell save DC.
You can spend 1 charge of Serenity’s Shadow to take the Hide or Disengage action as a bonus action.
While the Shadow is active you can add your proficiency bonus to Dexterity (Stealth checks).
Serenity’s Shadow has a number of charges equal to your warlock level +1. Once the Shadow’s Duration ends, you end it early as an action, or you use all charges of Serenity's Shadow, you must finish a long rest to use the Shadow again.
At 10th level, the shadow’s aura grants bonus AC to allies within range equal to half your Charisma modifier rounded down (minimum of +1). The radius of Serenity's Shadow expands to 30 feet.
At 14th level, the shadow’s aura grants double the proficiency bonus for Dexterity (Stealth) checks, and allows allies in its radius to take the Disengage or Hide action as a bonus action.
By 6th level, your body has adapted to recovering from gruesome injuries. You have advantage on death saving throws. Also, if you have hit points less than or equal to half of your hit point maximum, you can use a bonus action to roll one Hit Die to regain hit points; the amount of hit points regained is equal to the die roll plus your Charisma modifier.
At 14th level, you can cast the plane shift spell once without using a spell slot or material components, so long as you are headed to Sigil. You can use this feature to travel elsewhere if you possess the material component cost and spell slot to do so normally. As an reaction to the plane shift spell being cast by another creature, you can counter that spell immediately by using a 7th-level spell slot. Once you use this feature, you must finish a long rest before using it again.
Lady of Pain Patron Eldritch Invocations
Prerequisites: Lady of Pain patron
The radius of your Serenity’s Shadow feature expands by 30 feet. Additionally, while the shadow is active, you can cast the darkness spell by spending 3 charges of Serenity’s Shadow.
Prerequisites: Level 5, Lady of Pain patron
You are becoming crueler to your foes as you now score a critical hit on an attack roll of 19 or 20 while your Serenity's Shadow feature is active. Additionally, you become proficient in the Intimidation Skill if you are not already proficient.
Prerequisites: Level 10, Lady of Pain patron, Pact of the Blade
You have learned to foster an abnormal and persistent fear of pain in your enemies. Once per turn, you can deal an extra 5d6 psychic damage to one creature you hit with an attack if you have advantage on the attack roll. The attack must use your Pact Weapon.
You don't need advantage on the attack roll if another enemy of the target is within 5 feet of it, that enemy isn't incapacitated, and you don't have disadvantage on the attack roll.
I thought you were a deader for sure!
Prerequisites: Level 12, Lady of Pain Patron
Injuries are a daily occurrence in your line of work, granting you further insight into anatomy and medicine. You gain proficiency in the Medicine skill. Additionally, when you use the Severance feature, you now can add double your Charisma modifier to the die roll, and can reattach a severed limb by holding a severed body part (other than your head) to where it fell off.
Once you use this feature to reattach a limb, you can't use it again in this way until you finish a long rest.
The Lady's Maze
Prerequisites: Level 18, Lady of Pain patron
You gain mastery of the specific pocket dimensions wherein the Lady of Pain stuffs Berks who displease her. You can cast the maze spell once without using a spell slot. The maze appears to be a circular series of platforms, paths, and portals. The maze can also be cast on willing group of creatures equal to your Charisma modifier. Items and inanimate objects left in the maze will remain there. If the maze is used in this way, you must succeed on a DC 20 Intelligence check to end the spell early.
Once this invocation has been used for either function, you must take a long rest to gain access to the maze again.
Is this Lady of Patron warlock patron balanced against the official options?